Vampires of Tucson — Babydoll

Chapter 16

Babydoll — Bisbee

She opened her eyes.

She stared at the ceiling; wood planks, old construction, shadows pooling in the gaps between boards. Not the corrugated metal of the ranch building. Not the concrete of the restroom. Somewhere new.

The sounds of a police radio, and someone moving around. The smell of coffee.

Where the fuck am I?

She touched the cross at her throat, fingers worrying the silver. The motion felt practiced. Familiar. Wrong.

She sat up slowly, tactical assessment overriding confusion. The room was small, sparse, functional. Heavy blackout curtains covered the single window, thick enough that no light bled through. A chair sat in the corner, empty. The door was closed, locked from the inside; she could hear the subtle difference in air pressure, the way sound carried differently through an unsealed threshold.

No immediate threats.

The absence itself was information; no predator scent layered over the room's wood-and-dust baseline, no adrenaline salt from a human body somewhere nearby trying to stay quiet, no displacement of air suggesting something large had moved through the space while she slept, just the scanner's white noise bleeding under the door and the particular desert silence that came from being far enough from any city that the ambient dropped to zero and what remained was the sound of things that had never needed electricity to survive.

The walls were close enough to feel; old plaster over adobe block, still holding the day's warmth in its deeper layers, and the room carried the smell of decades of habitation stripped down to its essentials, motor oil and dry wood and the mineral sharpness of desert dust that had worked its way into every surface and never entirely left.

Her enhanced senses painted details in the darkness, dust particles suspended in still air, the faint chemical signature of old motor oil, the ghost-scent of coffee that had been brewed and poured out without being drunk. Underneath it all, desert; creosote and cooling stone and the particular emptiness that came from living at the edge of civilization. She catalogued the exits she already knew, door behind her, window ahead, wall to the left solid, ceiling not an option and not a plan either, inventory completed in the time it took a living person to exhale.

Someone's place. Someone who drinks coffee they can't taste. Someone who...

Memory surfaced in fragments. The San Pedro House parking lot. Dawn approaching. That song humming itself through her lips, wordless and melancholy. Then. Gravel under motorcycle tires. A voice like gravel grinding. Headlights. A man who'd sat with her, who'd offered extraction instead of elimination.

"You're not the first fledge I've found like this."

Bisbee. The borderlands vampire who pulled fledglings out of Bishop's kill zone.

He brought me here. Rode through the desert. Put me somewhere safe before dawn. Why? What does he want?

Her hand moved automatically; checking, confirming. She was clean. Had she showered? She was wearing his clothes. The jeans were still buttoned. Still zipped. She forced a hand into the pants; no underwear, but she didn't feel wrong. No sliminess, no residue. No new violations.

Okay. Not that. At least not yet. Maybe he wanted me aware?

Hypervigilance kicked in fully; the same survival mechanism that had kept her alive through Father's house, through the cartel's safe houses, through three nights of systematic pursuit by professional hunters. Screen every interaction for threat. Map behavioral patterns. Anticipate what they'll want before they ask for it.

She stood, bare feet silent on worn floorboards. Still wearing Bisbee's borrowed flannel and jeans, clothes that hung loose on her small frame.

The floorboards were worn smooth along the walking path and still rough-grained at the edges where no foot traffic had reached in decades, and her dead soles registered the difference as texture and pressure rather than temperature, the wood giving back nothing of warmth but everything of shape, a record in its grain of how people had moved through this space across however many years it had been standing here at the edge of the desert.

Okay. So. I'm in some vampire's house. That means he wants something. They always want something. Just need to figure out what, and whether I can afford to pay it.

She moved to the door, flipped the lock with a soft click, stepped into the main room.

Bisbee sat near the police scanner, its squelch and static filling the silence between transmissions. He held something that looked like a medical blood bag; tubes, labels, antiseptic packaging. Steam rose from it slightly. He'd warmed it. Deliberately. Practically.

His eyes lifted as she entered. No surprise at her appearance, just acknowledgment.

"You're up," he said. Voice like gravel, matter-of-fact. No performance, no false warmth.

Babydoll's eyes tracked to the blood bag, then back to his face. Her hunger stirred; not the screaming void she'd previously experienced, but present. Insistent. Demanding attention.

"That for me?" Flat delivery. No gratitude yet, just transaction.

"Yeah." He stepped into the room, set the bag on the small table near the chair. "Medical grade. No questions about source. It's warm, it's clean, it'll keep you functional."

She crossed to the table, keeping Bisbee in her sightline. Picked up the bag. The warmth seeped into her dead fingers. The smell hit her; antiseptic, sterile, wrong. Not fresh blood from a living source. Processed. Preserved. Like the difference between street food and military rations.

Beggars can't be choosers. And I'm definitely a beggar right now.

She tore into it anyway, fangs extending automatically. The blood tasted flat, metallic, missing the complexity of feeding directly from someone alive. But it filled the void, quieted the hunger, gave her suspended soul enough fuel to maintain the corpse that carried it.

She held the used bag a moment past the point where hunger was answered, fingers reading the texture of the plastic, the flat chemical weight of it against her dead skin telling her something the blood itself had not quite finished saying about what she was going to need from here forward and how far that need sat from anything she had planned for.

She set the bag down and stayed with both hands flat on the table, her dead fingers registering the wood grain the way they registered everything now, without preference or filter, every surface equally present and equally indifferent to whether she found it interesting or not, the sensory intake of a body that no longer sorted incoming information into relevant and irrelevant before passing it upward, just took it all in and left the sorting to whatever was left of her.

Bisbee watched without comment. Professional assessment. Someone who'd seen this a thousand times.

When she finished, she wiped her mouth with the back of her hand. "Tastes like hospital."

"Does the job."

"Yeah." She dropped the empty bag on the table. "So. What's the price?"

His eyes narrowed slightly. "Price?"

"For the rescue. For the blood. For not turning me over to Bishop's hunters." She crossed her arms, weight on one hip. Confrontational stance, not vulnerable. "Nobody does shit for free. What do you want?"

Bisbee was quiet, studying her with the same tactical assessment she'd been using on him. Then he moved to the chair, sat with the careful economy of an individual who'd learned not to waste energy on performance.

"You don't remember?"

"Remember what?"

"Yesterday?"

Babydoll's eyes narrowed.

The question didn't land like confusion. It landed like threat.

Her posture changed instantly; shoulders tightening, weight shifting back, chin angling just enough to track exits and angles. Predator and prey instincts colliding in the same small body.

"Yesterday," she repeated. "I remember the parking lot. The bike. The ride." Her jaw flexed. "After that it's... foggy."

Her gaze sharpened on him.

"What did we do?"

"We didn't do a damn thing."

Bisbee didn't move. Didn't soften. Didn't crowd her with reassurance. Just stayed in the chair, forearms on his knees, voice level.

"You got here. Checked the room. Checked the lock. Catalogued the bathroom like you were planning a siege."

Her eyes flicked; he was right.

"You took a shower. About forty minutes."

Her fingers twitched at her sides.

"You came out," he continued, "tried to negotiate with the only currency you thought you had left. I told you no. You called me 'Papi.' I told you not to."

Her jaw tightened before she could stop it. Anger or shame; hard to tell.

"I don't;" She stopped. Swallowed. "I don't remember doing that."

"I can tell."

That answer hit harder than if he'd argued.

My body ran the script without me. Tried to pay for safety in the one currency it's always known. Didn't even wait for me to decide.

Her breathing changed. Not faster; shallower. Controlled. Contained panic.

"What else?" she asked.

Bisbee held her gaze. "You told me about the hunter. About drinking her. About the memories."

Babydoll went very still.

"I was there," she said again, but this time it sounded like she was trying to convince herself. "I remember telling you I killed someone. I remember the cross."

Her hand flew to her throat, clutching the broken chain.

"I don't remember talking about... her daughter."

"You did."

"Ok, so where does that leave us?"

He could've done anything. Didn't. Either he's playing long game or... No. Don't trust it. Figure out what he wants.

"You are in a border town named Bisbee. My town," he said, voice flat and factual. "I make a point of eliminating threats. A few days ago one of the hunters who were chasing you, a fragile named Bones, came to me and let me know they were tracking you."

He paused.

"Why would he do that?"

"Polite to let me know they might be operating in my territory. Shows respect."

"Oh."

"From what he told me, I decided you might be worth saving. So, I pull you out at the San Pedro House." His eyes met hers directly. "I've got a network. Safe houses, transportation, people who can teach you how to survive without getting yourself killed or exposing the rest of us."

A network. An underground railroad for dead girls. That's... Too good. Has to be a catch.

"And what do you get out of it?" Her voice stayed flat, suspicious. "Besides the warm fuzzy feeling of saving traumatized teenagers?"

A suggestion of macabre wit flickered across his weathered features. "I sleep better. Or would, if I could sleep."

The answer was too honest to be a lie, too self-aware to be manipulation. Babydoll processed that, trying to find the angle and coming up empty.

"So, you just... rescue people? For free?"

"Something like that. Keeps my conscience clean." He leaned back slightly. "I find kids like you, evaluate, sometimes I end up putting them down. Sometimes someone else takes over the teaching part. If you're interested, you'll meet her tomorrow night. Abuela. She runs a sanctuary in Sierra Vista for kids like you; new fledglings, survivors, abandoned, and learning to exist without falling apart."

"How many?" The question came out sharper than intended.

"Right now? Four others at the sanctuary. Over the years?" He shrugged. "More than there should be. Less than I've found."

The math was brutal.

"And if I don't want to go?"

"Then you don't go." Simple. Direct. "I can help for a while, but this town isn't big enough to support both of us. Not enough people to feed on. That and Bishop's hunters are still looking for you, and they don't give up easy. You stay here, you'll be found eventually. That won't be good for either of us. Your best bet is Abuela. Her sanctuary gives you time to get strong enough to handle yourself."

Before Babydoll could respond, gravel crunched outside. The distinctive sound of tires on desert hardpack, engine rumble cutting through the night. Deliberate. Approaching. She had already mapped the sound of the road out front, how vehicles on the hardpack carried differently from foot traffic, how this engine ran clean and quiet in a way that suggested someone who maintained their equipment, who traveled prepared.

Bisbee's attention sharpened immediately. He rose, went to the window, and parted the curtain just enough to glimpse outside.

Babydoll had already shifted her weight toward the far wall, one eye on the curtained window. "Expecting company?"

"No." He let the curtain fall. "Stay here."

Yeah, because that worked out great last time someone told me to stay put.

But she stayed anyway, watching through the gap as Bisbee stepped onto the porch. The truck outside had cut its engine; matte paint, dust-caked. Professional vehicle, not local traffic.

Through the gap in the curtain she could see the parking area and the access road beyond and the desert past that, layers of darkness resolving into different textures the further out her enhanced vision pushed, the near ground bright with reflected starlight and the scrub mid-distance a mass of shadow-shapes she could resolve into individual plants if she needed to, and past all of it the open Sonoran dark that had no feature to resolve into and just went on until it hit something solid enough to stop it.

The driver's door opened with careful deliberation. A man stepped out; lean, coiled, moving with military precision. Pistol on his belt, eyes sharp, expression unreadable.

The two men faced each other across the distance. Neither spoke immediately. Desert silence filled the gap, heavy with assessment.

Then the stranger's voice cut through, low and certain. "Ghost Step said the Three Sisters walk with you."

Bisbee's posture shifted fractionally. Recognition. "Ain't heard that one in years."

"Name's Warren." Flat delivery, professional courtesy.

"Standing Deer vouching for you?"

"Yeah."

Bisbee nodded once, stepped aside. "Better come in."

Babydoll moved away from the door as it opened, positioning herself near the far wall where she could see both men clearly. Arms crossed over her chest. Legs crossed at the ankle. Weight back on her heels, body angled just enough to keep both exits in sightline. The borrowed flannel hung loose enough that there was nothing presenting. Good.

Warren entered with the same careful precision he'd used approaching the house; taking in the room's layout, exit points, potential threats.

His gaze found her immediately. Assessed. Catalogued. Filed away.

She met his gaze without flinching. Let him look. Let him see exactly what Bishop's hunters had been chasing; a teenage girl in borrowed clothes, exhausted and dangerous in equal measure.

He just... stayed at my face. He didn't even try to look at my tits. Not even a little. What am I supposed to do with that?

Warren's gaze shifted to Babydoll, then back to Bisbee. "Part of your operation?"

Bisbee's posture shifted; protective, wary. "Who's asking depends on who Ghost Step vouched for."

Warren kept his hands visible, professional. "Standing Deer sent me for intel on border operations. Didn't mention running into anyone else."

"She's nobody," Bisbee said. "Not here. Didn't see her. We clear?"

Her arms had come apart when she said it. She hadn't told them to.

"I'm Babydoll." Flat correction, reclaiming her name. "And I'm standing right here."

Warren's attention shifted fully to her. "Warren Sterling." He glanced at Bisbee. "He said you watch the border, might have intelligence I need."

"Intelligence on what?"

"Coordinated vampire creation along the border. Young victims, abandoned immediately after turning." Warren's tone stayed flat. "Elder Bishop contracted me to identify and eliminate whoever's running the operation."

"Bishop." Bisbee's voice went flat. "Her hunters were through here recently. Looking for a specific target."

Warren's attention sharpened. "What kind of target?"

"Newly turned girl. Maybe five, six days dead. Rational, functional, dangerous." Bisbee's eyes flicked toward Babydoll briefly. "They call them Claudias. Young vampires turned and abandoned."

There's that word again. Like we're a category. A problem to solve.

Babydoll straightened in the chair. "You hunt vampires?"

Warren met her gaze. "I hunt the ones who create problems. The ones who turn kids and abandon them to go rabid. The ones who threaten to expose all of us." He paused. "I don't hunt victims. I hunt perpetrators." Another pause, quieter. "Sympathy doesn't clear a room."

The distinction landed with weight. Babydoll processed it, reading his body language for deception and finding only steady conviction.

He's not lying. He actually means it. The monster who breaks worse monsters.

"What do you need?" Bisbee's voice cut through her assessment.

"Information on recent turnings. Patterns, locations, descriptions of any sires involved." Warren pulled out his notebook. "Standing Deer mentioned multiple Claudias appearing simultaneously across the border region. That suggests organized operation, not lone actors."

The scanner had been running its low commentary the whole time they'd been in the room, dispatch calls and code sequences that Bisbee tracked with some corner of his attention the way old habits never let you stop listening for the frequencies you've trained yourself to hear, and Babydoll had found herself parsing it in the background too, sorting out which traffic was local and which was highway, which calls were routine and which carried that particular compressed urgency that meant something had actually happened out there in the dark beyond the curtains.

"You think it's more than one sire?" Bisbee's tone sharpened.

"I do, which means Bishop will. That's why she hired me; to identify the operation and eliminate it."

Babydoll spoke before Bisbee could respond. "Ah Puch." Her fingers found the cross, working the crude knot with unconscious precision. Dani's nervous habit, now hers.

Both men turned to look at her.

"That's what he called himself." Her voice stayed flat, measured. Professional distance from her own trauma. "The one who turned me. Ah Puch. Bat-faced pendejo with death-god theater and a thing for wrapping corpses in thermal foil."

Warren's attention sharpened. "Can you describe him?"

"Yeah." She moved to the table, closer to him than to the exits, and sat down with deliberate casualness. Her body had made the calculation before she had.

Close enough now. Something reached her that hadn't from across the room. Almost clean, faintly oily. Not motor oil. Not sweat. Not anything she had a word for. She filed it under the same place she'd put everything else about him so far.

Performance of control she didn't entirely feel.

"You want the whole story or just the highlights?"

"Everything you remember."

He wants to know. Actually wants to listen. Not performing concern. Just... listening. When's the last time anyone actually listened?

She took a breath her dead flesh didn't need, organized the narrative the way she'd learned to compartmentalize trauma. Clinical. Factual. Distant.

"I'm from San Cristóbal de las Casas. Chiapas. My mamá died when I was little, and after that my father..." She took a breath that didn't quite fill her lungs. "He trained me. What men want. How to please them. How power works. How to survive when someone owns you."

He's going to do the face.

His jaw did something. Brief. Gone before she could name it. Then his eyes hardened, recognition. Not pity.

He didn't do the face. Okay. Keep going.

"I lived like that until I was eighteen. Then I chose the cartel. Or maybe I just chose a different kind of trap." Her voice stayed even. "They turned me into a mule. Packed me with product and pushed me across the border."

"How much product?" Warren's question was tactical, not judgmental.

"Enough to kill me if one ruptured. They didn't care." She held his gaze. "I don't remember crossing. Don't remember dying. Just remember darkness, then waking up completely nude in the desert wrapped in that foil shroud with bat-face standing over me calling it a 'gift.'"

"Physical description?"

She leaned forward across the table, elbows down, giving him the detail like she was laying evidence. Somewhere in the lean, the borrowed flannel had one more button undone than it had before.

"Bat-like features; flattened nose, sunken eyes like obsidian, too many teeth. Skin like parchment stretched over bone, patches of black. Wore rotting ceremonial robes, bone charms on a chain. Smelled like decay and damp earth." She logged the details with practiced precision. "Spoke like every word was ritual. Called the turning 'teoxihuitl'; sacred death made flesh or some bullshit."

Warren's pen kept moving. Eyes on the notebook.

Still nothing. Not even a flicker. The script assumes someone on the other end who wants to collect. He's not collecting anything.

She had rehearsed this testimony inside her own skull a hundred times since the desert, cycling the details in the dark because letting them blur into the general weight of everything else meant losing the only leverage she had over what had happened to her, and saying them aloud now to someone who committed them to paper made them different somehow, less like something she was still inside and more like something that could be handed over, the way evidence differs from memory in that evidence is meant to go somewhere.

Nothing. He didn't even...

She sat back. Kept talking.

Warren wrote quickly, professional notation. "Did he say why he turned you specifically?"

"Survival capacity." Bitter laugh. "Said I'd been 'forged in fire,' that trauma made me stronger than other Claudias. Thought he was saving me." Her voice went colder. "Told him he was years too late. That he got Father's sloppy seconds and the coyotes' leftovers."

The room was silent for a moment. Warren finished writing, looked up.

"Ah Puch is a Mayan death god. Old name, theatrical presentation, working the border corridor." Warren made notes. "Fits the profile. But he's not working alone; this operation is too systematic, too widespread for a single operator."

He looked up at Babydoll. "Did he mention anyone else? Other names, other vampires involved in the turnings?"

She shook her head. "Just him. He was solo when he found me."

"Doesn't mean he's solo in the operation." Warren tapped his notebook. "The pattern suggests coordination. Multiple sires, synchronized timing, deliberate target selection."

"You think you can find him?"

"In sha'a Allah."

Arabic. Unexpected.

"And then?"

"Then I end him. Clean. Quiet. Before anyone else gets hurt." He held her gaze directly. "That's not a maybe. That's a guarantee."

He means it. Not performing. Not lying. Actually going to hunt the pendejo who did this to me.

Something shifted in her chest. Recognition. The understanding that some predators hunt other predators, that the system has opposition, that she might not be entirely alone in whatever the hell this was.

Warren turned to Bisbee. "I'm also coordinating with a PI in Tucson. Twenty-plus years working missing persons, trafficking cases. He's been tracking disappearances from a commercial pipeline in Nogales; three girls who vanished before reaching their buyers. His angle is how the trafficking operation feeds into organized conversion."

Three girls. Commercial pipeline. Disappeared before reaching buyers. That's not random. That's interception.

"How does a missing persons PI connect to coordinated creation?" Bisbee's tone carried professional skepticism.

"One of his cases; Colombian girl, eighteen, blue hair. Disappeared late March from a motel staging location in Nogales. Went through photographer staging, then a military-looking figure intervened and everyone scattered." Warren consulted his notes. "She never made it to delivery. His working theory is that someone's intercepting trafficking victims mid-transit and converting them."

Bisbee stilled. "Colombian girl with blue hair. That's Blondie."

Warren looked up from his notebook.

"She's at sanctuary," Bisbee said. "Gave full disclosure during intake. Photographer staging, military figure she called Teniente, getting turned and buried behind a Circle K."

"Teniente," Warren repeated, writing. "Lieutenant. Military presentation, deliberate interception, immediate abandonment post-conversion." He looked up. "So that's theatrical death-god presentation with Ah Puch, tactical military operation with Teniente. Different methodologies, same target population, same corridor."

"And you think they're connected?"

"Patterns don't lie. Multiple sires, synchronized activity, same geographic region, same victim demographic." Warren closed his notebook. "Here's what I need. Testimony from survivors about their sires. Physical descriptions, locations, anything that helps me build a complete map of who's creating Claudias along the border. And the PI needs Blondie specifically; her testimony maps the commercial trafficking side, how victims get intercepted mid-transit." He glanced at Bisbee, something flat in his expression. "Never confuse movement with progress."

Bisbee's jaw tightened. "You want access to my network."

"I want to stop the people making new Claudias." Warren's voice stayed level. "Every sire I identify is one less creator filling your sanctuary past capacity. Every testimony gets us closer to shutting down the organized operation before Bishop decides containment means elimination instead of investigation."

He's not wrong. If this keeps going, if more Claudias keep showing up... Bishop just sends more hunters. And those hunters don't care about salvageable versus rabid. They just clean house.

"What about the girls themselves?"

"Not my mission. I'm only on contract for the sires."

Bisbee considered that a moment.

"On our terms," Bisbee said. "This isn't Tucson. Bishop's authority doesn't mean shit. You'll have to negotiate for access with Abuela. I will insist that the girls consent individually, and they stop when they're done. Not when you're done, when they are done. No pushing them, no questioning it, just accept they are done."

"Agreed."

"Are they okay to talk?" Babydoll asked again.

Both men looked at her.

"The girls at sanctuary." She met Bisbee's eyes directly. "You said four others. Are they in a place where they can handle this, or are they still..."

She didn't finish the sentence. Didn't need to. She knew what "still" meant.

Bisbee studied her. "Some more than others. That's why they need to each consent, not to have Abuela do it for them."

Some more than others. Which means some of them are where I was three nights ago. Barely holding it together, running on survival instinct, not ready for someone with a notebook asking them to relive the worst thing that ever happened.

"Fair," Babydoll said.

Bisbee's expression changed. Approval, near enough.

Warren pulled out a contact card. "Have Abuela reach out when she's ready to talk. One or both of you can verify credentials through Bishop or any other channel she trusts." He paused. "I've also got contact information for the PI. When coordination makes sense, pass it along."

Bisbee accepted the card without commitment. "I'll talk to Abuela. But I'm not promising anything beyond consideration. These are kids who've been trafficked, turned, abandoned. They don't owe investigators shit, even if those investigators are hunting the ones who did this to them."

"Understood." Warren stood. "But every day we don't identify these sires is another day they're making new Claudias. Your sanctuary's got four, soon to be five. Next month it could be eight. From what you've said, Bishop's already funding extermination."

"Then we'll consider it. Our terms, our timeline."

"Fair enough." A pause. "Plan's good until first contact, though. Just so we're clear."

Warren turned to Babydoll. "You stay safe. Anything else you remember about Ah Puch, tell Bisbee. He knows how to reach me."

She nodded once. Said nothing. Her posture had shifted without her noticing. Not smaller, not closed. Not braced. Something she didn't have a word for, because the thing she usually braced for had never materialized. He took the testimony. Not her. Just the testimony.

Warren left the way he'd arrived; carefully, professionally, disappearing into the desert night.

She listened to the truck's engine note decay through the stages she'd already mapped in reverse; the access road, the junction, the stretch of hardpack before the highway, and then the point where the Doppler shift told her the vehicle had turned and the sound began dropping below ambient, lower and lower until the desert reclaimed it the way it reclaimed everything that stopped moving through it long enough, folding the silence back over the gap until there was no gap left.

When the truck's engine faded to silence, Bisbee moved back to the police scanner, adjusted the frequency. Outside the window the desert had gone back to doing what it did between the moments when humans moved through it; the creosote smell had strengthened as the ground cooled, and somewhere in the scrub beyond the road something small was moving through dry brush with the patient, deliberate certainty of a creature that had never needed to hurry. The sound of it going was different from how it arrived; the engine note falling away by degrees, swallowed by desert and distance until there was nothing left but wind moving through creosote and the click-cool of the desert settling into night. Static and squelch filled the room.

He's really going after Ah Puch. Not because I asked. Not because he owes me anything. Just because that's the job. That's... something. I don't know what, but it's not nothing.

"He'll really find him?" Her voice came out flat, but something underneath wanted the answer to be yes.

"Hard to say. Just met him." Bisbee adjusted the scanner frequency. "But Ghost Step doesn't vouch for people who waste his time. If Warren's hunting sires..." He spread his hands slightly, leaving the conclusion unspoken.

Pause.

"Seems like he's got a clue, at least."

She processed that. Predator hunting predator. System with opposition. Maybe she wasn't completely by herself in this fucked-up existence.

Not hope. Not yet. Just... less alone.

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